tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post758851504666575863..comments2019-09-03T08:24:59.678-07:00Comments on the new me: sunday scribblings - traditionUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-59897401832620953182008-12-17T06:28:00.000-08:002008-12-17T06:28:00.000-08:00Terrific images and I'm shivering from the build-u...Terrific images and I'm shivering from the build-up and emotional tension.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-66266008886500161952008-12-11T17:07:00.000-08:002008-12-11T17:07:00.000-08:00Each line brought forth feelings of sadness. I fe...Each line brought forth feelings of sadness. I felt the chill.Roanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-80930685093144307822008-12-08T20:11:00.000-08:002008-12-08T20:11:00.000-08:00sad but it's the emotion which has really given th...sad but it's the emotion which has really given the poem its depth here. besides, i love sad pieces :) they feel much more real. the imagery works as well, overwhelming the senses.niyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17079530266648829107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-37426937017317042722008-12-08T06:43:00.000-08:002008-12-08T06:43:00.000-08:00so sad...so sad...latreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521924109825718501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-68829020210905887252008-12-07T16:22:00.000-08:002008-12-07T16:22:00.000-08:00A very sad tradition, beautifully expressed.A very sad tradition, beautifully expressed.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-34586203519378210582008-12-07T16:07:00.000-08:002008-12-07T16:07:00.000-08:00Very sad and very evocative. I like the sense of ...Very sad and very evocative. I like the sense of emptiness that is conveyed, and the way you dull the surroundings to make them secondary to the subject at hand.JAWilkinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03765023368114277176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-65044013739664344082008-12-07T07:02:00.000-08:002008-12-07T07:02:00.000-08:00brilliant use if imagerybrilliant use if imageryRamblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04048279856792308653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-86013105788007137062008-12-06T21:50:00.000-08:002008-12-06T21:50:00.000-08:00Great images!"...the darkness and cold they suck h...Great images!<BR/><I>"...the darkness and cold <BR/>they suck her back into another time<BR/>another place..."</I> Powerful words!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334812243182354729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-9601596579813468872008-12-06T21:18:00.000-08:002008-12-06T21:18:00.000-08:00wow, this is so sad and unfortunately so real for ...wow, this is so sad and unfortunately so real for so many who've lost someone tragically.<BR/>so nicely written. <BR/>:)Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-23756655151540761782008-12-06T20:01:00.000-08:002008-12-06T20:01:00.000-08:00Very powerful images and feelings evoked in this p...Very powerful images and feelings evoked in this poem. I could feel the pain and sadness.Ravenous Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00325906647070110290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164803301524662447.post-24929492169393954042008-12-06T17:33:00.000-08:002008-12-06T17:33:00.000-08:00A "sad tradion of sorts". Yes, remembering loss, p...A "sad tradion of sorts". Yes, remembering loss, projected back to that moment while visiting the site of the tragedy. Even a sign, the gash in the post, to remind. You took me back there with you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com