17 November 2008

light me up

bright sparkly
twinkly lit up
in my face under the sky
glistening the shiny reflection
facets smooth and sleek
sliding over
slipping shimmering
white red glow
flipping on and off
wondered by at

2 comments:

  1. ChefDruckNovember 17, 2008 at 9:24 PM

    I love all the different types of light in this poem.

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  2. Bear NakedNovember 19, 2008 at 9:14 AM

    Your poetry is awesome.
    I love it.
    I am going to start *following* your blog.
    Thank you for visiting and commenting on my blog.
    Bear((( )))

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