19 June 2009

sunday scribblings - vision

vision - sunday scribblings

"vision"
perky hot sexy
drawn in
enamoured and enthralled
voice carried away
pretty words twisted
flipped beneath upside
slicked back grosgrain vision
red sordid tales
woe not
strength in her
strengthened her
back turned
walked away

5 comments:

  1. ohh what an attempt :)

    great job done :)


    Happy SS

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  2. thats very good, and a completely different take on vision to mine :)

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  3. "slicked back...vision"

    i love this line

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  4. whoohoo sis - this was hot :)I could hear "Boys Of Summer" playing in the background.

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